Project name: No one there Genre: Pop Beat: 4/4
Project ID: 21 Tracks: 19 Key: C-major
Initiator: B_mind bpm: 90 Duration: 3:55
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    B_mind

    ... says to this project: Date:13.03.09

    " No one there ! - The story "


    This song describes the feelings I had when my former long lasting relationship ended and I suddenly found myself in a comletely new situation. Before I wrote the lyrics for a couple of weeks I always had a flute melody in my mind - whatever I did. So I decided to make my story to a song. But how to sing a song without having a studio and without going on your neighbours nerves. I decided to record the vocals somewhere on a small road in a nearby forest sitting in my car with my Laptop on my knees, That´s the story how this song-project started. It´s great what happens now. It seems as this project is really enhancing now. Thanks for that!
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1No one there - Pianovers.25.02.2009Pop48
2No one there09.10.2008Pop74

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42 Vocals V3
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    B_mind

    says to this track: Date:09.09.10

    " WhOW "


    Whow, what a difference! It rock's. I heard it in that track combination: 10 / 13 / 14 / 15 / 16 / 25 / (27) I want to alter some instrumentals to get a better match for this (weekend). Please don't overwrite/delete the other vocal version.
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    Gamer2bn

    says to this track: Date:09.09.10

    " Thank-you "


    Glad you like it, I will make another recording of both versions (and save the old ones in case I mess them up) and then probably another when I have the cash to pick up a usb mic interface and a good mic. Need too save up 3-400 dollars for that though so it may be a bit. Anyways, I was thinking with this version some sax, trumpet, or harmonica would sound good in the chorus. Sorry about changing the arrangement so much, I just needed a little soul in it. :]
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35 Vocals
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    Gamer2bn

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " Sorry "


    I changed your lyrics a bit, it seemed like the english was a little off and at times it confused me so I changed it in a way that I think conveys the same message you were going for please let me know if I botched it.
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    Gamer2bn

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " Just some thoughts "


    I think the chorus should be a female singer also you should change this too a duet have a woman singing the same blues as both lovers feel the pain of being apart after the female's parts the male should sing the chorus and after the males the female (by chorus I mean the track chorus not the entire chorus just the voice overs though when the male is singing the chorus track the female should sing the chorus itself.)
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    B_mind

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " Sound good "


    Hey, well done! I like it! ;-) You are a really good singer! Female chorus singers is a good idea. I think the changed lyrics are perfect. Only the "now" of "But its now too late now" is double. Beginning from "I have a large bed to share" you switch into a deeper feeling. This is very nice. I'm wonderingn it this "feeling" wouldn't apply for the first part of the song as well. You are right. Your microphone sounds extremely clear without any lower frequences. A bit like "phone" sound. Not sure, but I think I heard some clipping too. Did you record/export in good quality like .wav or .aiff ? If so and if there is no clipping I could try to adjust the bass a bit. But only worth it if the recording/exporting quality is sufficient.
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    Gamer2bn

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " mic "


    I intend to re-record with hopefully a better microphone. Also this was converted to mp3 as it wasn't meant to be published. The next I will upload as a high quality wav.
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    Gamer2bn

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " but it's not too late "


    I changed it too it's not too late, my reasoning for this is the lyrics make it seem like the writer (you) didn't want it too be over at the time and the song is directed too her so for her it's not too later she could come back telling her it is too late would be against everything else the song unless if it was changed to be self directed or from a female singer telling the male it's too late.
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    B_mind

    says to this track: Date:07.09.10

    " ;-) "


    Oh, than I mistaken, sorry. ;-)
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29 Strings for V3.1
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    28 Flute for V3.1
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      27 Strings V3.1
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        B_mind

        says to this track: Date:15.03.09

        " Sehr schön die Strings "


        Hallo Howie, gefällt mit inzwischen sehr gut! Ich hab mal experimentiert und zwei Tracks hochgeladen. Das eine sind zusätzliche Strings zu diesem Track hier, also kein Ersatz, sondern wenn dann als Ergänzung!! Wenn man sich NUR die zwei Strings zusammen anhört erinnert einen das schon fast an eine Oper, oder Filmmusik. Das andere ist eine Flöte (wenn, dann auch zusätzlich gedacht). Ich kann das aber im Moment selber nicht merh beurteilen, da ich es inzwischen zu oft gehört hab. Brauche da mal ein paar Tage dazwischen.
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      26 Strings V3
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        B_mind

        says to this track: Date:13.03.09

        " Streicher haben noch Potential "


        Hallo Howie, Ja die Streicher passen super! Ein paar stellen könnte man noch optimieren. Hab Dir dazu eine message geschickt!
      3:5511.03.0912.03.09
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      25 Piano V3
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        B_mind

        says to this track: Date:13.03.09

        " Piano ist nun perfekt "


        Hi Howie, Das Piano ist nun perfekt! Der Bruch bei 1:49 ist weg. Sehr gut!
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      21 Piano
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        16 Bass 1
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          15 Bass 2
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            14 Chorus
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              12
              13 Drums
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                12 Flute
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                  11 Guitar
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                    10 Piano
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                      9 Vocal
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                      To be improved !
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                        Title: Lonely Plant
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                          TITEL: No one there My face is wet of all the tears and my thoughts sometimes makes me fear the memorys I have. No more people I want to see. I don´t want them to point at me. I feel so sad. REFRAIN Is this all real do you still feel. Is it just a dream like it sometimes seems. What do you think. What do you feel. Are you somehow near me. or anywhere. What were your thoughts if you could see how I feel and treated myself. Would this somehow help I don´t know, if you feel the same or if you maybe felt ashamed. But it-s now too late. PAUSE I have a large bed to share but there-s no one with me here. Just me myself. Hard to belive but that now my life. No one to love and no future wife I used to have. REFRAIN Is this all real. Do you still feel. Is it a dream like it sometimes seems. What would you think. What would you say. Are you somehow near me or anywhere. What would you think if you could know that I still love you so. Would you be here. How is your live now without me who shares your bed and makes you feel. Don´t you miss me. REFRAIN Is this all real. Do you still feel. Is it a dream. like it sometimes seems. What would you think. What would you say. Are you somehow near me or anywhere.

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